Audience Feedback

Planning

I like the typography research as it shows us the ideas that you may want to follow in your final magazine product.

I like your music magazine analysis presentation because you have extended your answers where as some others have just labelled elements of the magazine, this shows your understanding of why a magazine would design their magazine the way they did.

I like how you have uploaded your questionnaire on the presentation hosting website as it looks professional on your blog, however you should have your questionnaire and your questionnaire analysis on separate blog posts because it will be easier to see what you will learn from the results on your questionnaire.

Construction

I like the presentation of your photoshoot but it would be better if you took/ included all of the images you took because then we can see what pictures you used and what you haven’t used and it also helps us see your ideas and conventions. I like slide 5 of your photoshoot presentation because we can see the idea you took from the image featured in the real magazine which shows us the ideas behind your research.

I like your double page spread. I like it because of the layout of the images on the right page and the article on the left. I like the big quote featured in your double page spread also some of the text in the article cannot be seen because of the quote so this will have to be changed.

I also really like your masthead because of the headphones over the ‘o’ which fits in with the genre of music.

Evaluation

For the questions in your evaluation you should evaluate and extend the questions more so we understand more about your ideas. For example, with question 7 how did you improve overall in the main task compared to the prelim task.

Feedback by Shannen